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  LIT 165 Syllabus
  LIT 165 Announcements and Assignments
  WRT 120 Syllabus
  WRT 120 Announcements and Assignments

Notebook for Topics in Literature: Imaginary Worlds (Spring 2008)
  A Reading of THE TEMPEST

Notebook for Topics in Literature: Rites of Passage (Spring 2006)
  Goals of the Course
  Fundamental Questions about Literature
  Valuing Literature
  Critical Thinking and Reading Literature
  Critical Approaches to Literature
  Literature as ART
  Ambiguity
  Approaching the Art of Fiction
  Defining the Short Story
  Evaluating Short Fiction
  Craft of Fiction: PLOT
  Craft of Fiction: CHARACTER
  Small Group Exercise
  ARABY by James Joyce
  WHERE ARE YOU GOING, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN? by Joyce Carol Oates
  Our RITES OF PASSAGE Theme
  A note about GIRL
  POE and the art of STORY OF A HOUR
  THE YELLOW WALLPAPER
  YOUNG MAN ON SIXTH AVENUE
  Notes on Innovative Fiction
  Assignment Sheet for Paper #1
  Fiction and Ambiguity - Your Questions
  Writing Workshop - Short Fiction
  Poetry Journal Project Assignment Sheet
  LITERARY SYNTHESIS PROJECT
  Defining Poetry
  Reading Poetry
  The Craft of Poetry
  Drama and Tragedy
  Study Questions: DEATH OF A SALESMAN

Notebook for Effective Writing I (Spring 2006)
  Paper #4 Assignment Sheet
  Critical Thinking and Commentary
  Casebook: Evaluating Sources Worksheet
  Selecting Information
  Evaluating Arguments
  CASEBOOK PROJECT Assignment Sheet
  Approaching Persuasive Writing
  Topic Development - Profile Essay
  Generating Ideas for the Profile Essay
  Paper #2 Assignment Sheet
  Profile Exercise
  Analyzing THE FIVE BEDROOM, SIX FIGURE ROOTLESS LIFE
  Objective Writing: Selected Readings
  Writing Workshop: Paper #1
  Expressive Writing in the NYTimes
  Writing Effective Introductions and Conclusions
  Paper #1: IDENTITY
  Expressive Writing
  Open Letter Exercise and Examples
  EMERSON on Individuality vs. Conformity
  Literature related to IDENTITY
  Understanding the 'Rhetorical Situation'

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  Weblog for WRT 120
  Writing Assistance on the Web
  Blackboard at WCU
  WCU Homepage
  WCU's Francis Harvey Green Library

Notebook for Topics in Literature: Imaginary Worlds (Fall 2005)
  One Last Look at Imaginary Worlds
  Franz Kafka's BEFORE THE LAW
  Analyzing WAITING FOR GODOT
  Approaching WAITING FOR GODOT
  Paper #3: Assignment Sheet
  Paper #4: Independent Project
  The Problem of Stability in BRAVE NEW WORLD
  UTOPIA/DYSTOPIA Links
  Analyzing Huxley's BRAVE NEW WORLD
  Defining Utopia
  Embarking on Huxley's BRAVE NEW WORLD
  A Reading of Shakespeare's THE TEMPEST
  From today's news (11/3/05)
  Assignment Sheet for Paper #2
  Goodbye to Dante's Imaginary World
  Stepping Through Dante's Inferno: Cantos 10-34
  Stepping Through Dante's Inferno: Cantos 1-10
  INFERNO: Questions/Analysis: Cantos 32-34
  INFERNO: Questions/Analysis: Cantos 18-31
  INFERNO: Questions for Analysis: Cantos 12-17
  INFERNO: Structure
  INFERNO: Questions for Analysis: Cantos 1-5
  INFERNO: Analyzing Canto 1
  Relating to Dante's Inferno
  Approaching Dante's DIVINE COMEDY
  A Little Help with Dante's INFERNO
  Assignment Sheet for Paper #1
  Notes on LEAF BY NIGGLE
  Responses to LEAF BY NIGGLE
  ON FAIRY STORIES: An Essay by Tolkien
  Notes on Axolotl
  Reading Ovid's Tales
  From Myth to Literature: Approaching Ovid's Tales
  Notes on THE EYE OF THE GIANT
  Functions of the Genesis Tales
  Analyzing Mythic Tales
  Defining Mythology
  Filtering the Introduction to FANTASTIC WORLDS
  Commentary on LA BELLE DAME SANS MERCI by Keats
  Commentary on DARKNESS by Byron
  Handout: Imagination Poems Set
  What is Imagination?
  Our Course Theme: Imaginary Worlds
  LIT 165 Assignments: Fall 2005
  LIT 165 Announcements: Fall 2005
  Imaginary Worlds: Course Syllabus

Notebook for Effective Writing I (Fall 2005)
  Paper #4: Independent Thinking/Reading/Writing
  Casebook Preparation Checklist
  Casebook Assignment Schedule
  Evaluating Sources for the Casebook
  Casebook Project Assignment Sheet
  Notes on Rational Argument
  Argument
  Assignment Sheet: Objective Writing
  Reviewing Elements of the Profile Essay
  Writing the Profile Essay
  Readings: Objective Writing
  Assignment Sheet: Expressive Writing
  Rubric for Evaluation of Writing
  About SKIN DEEP
  Emerson on Individuality vs. Conformity
  Mind-map: Identity
  Understanding the 'Rhetorical Situation'
  Assignments Page
  Announcements Page
  WRT 120 Course Syllabus for Fall 2005

ENG Q20: Basic Writing

Go Exploring
  Weblog for WRT 120
  Writing Assistance on the Web
  Blackboard at WCU
  WCU Homepage
  WCU's Francis Harvey Green Library

 
WRITING WORKSHOP: PAPER #1
Short Fiction



The purpose of the workshop is to give and receive constructive feedback on these papers while they are in progress.  Just as you would want to receive feedback that might help you improve your work, you should be interested in providing feedback that may help someone else improve.  

With this goal in mind, I’d like you to read and respond to at least two papers this class period. First read the paper straight through without making any marks on it.  Then go back to the beginning and read it again, this time to annotate it thoughtfully, critically, responsively. Some questions are provided below to guide your response.  But in general, if you’re reading an essay, you will be looking to comment on the paper’s focus, development, organization, style, and correctness.  Try to provide constructive criticism wherever you think the draft could be improved, or encouragement where you think the draft is successful.  Include your own responses to give the writer an indication of where the essay is most and least meaningful or powerful.  If you find that you have few ideas for improvement, discuss what you think has been the writer’s overall purpose and message, and whether or not that message is meaningful to you personally.

If you are reading a creative short story, your comments will be somewhat different than they might be if you were responding to an essay.  Some questions below should help guide your response.  You can comment on the plot design, the character development, the narrative point of view, whether any element in the story has taken on a symbolic resonance, and what the meaning of the story seems to be to you.  

EVALUATING ESSAYS

    FOCUS.  How well is the paper focused?  Locate and evaluate the writer’s thesis sentence(s) and determine whether the essay is unified around this controlling idea.  Does the thesis provide an anchor for all of the content in the essay?  Should the thesis be revised to reflect more accurately how the writer develops the paper, or should the paper be revised to reflect this thesis?  Is there any content in the essay which does not relate back to this controlling idea?  How can the writer make adjustments to improve the paper’s focus and unity?

    DEVELOPMENT.  How well is the essay developed?  Are key points explained in depth, or does the writer seem to merely scratch the surface?  What further rhetorical strategies can the writer use to develop key points in the essay (i.e., textual evidence, examples, anecdotes, comparisons, definitions, etc.).   If you are reading an expressive essay, does the writer first make it clear how the literature has provided the springboard for personal reflection without resorting to plot summary?  Are the writer’s personal experiences presented in a vivid, engaging way?  If you are reading an analytical (objective) essay, does the writer provide enough observation and inference to fully explain the meaning

    STRUCTURE.  How well is the essay structured?  Examine the quality of the introduction and conclusion—are they bland or engaging?  Can the writer use one of the strategies on the handout provided, “Writing Effective Introductions and Conclusions”?  Consider the arrangement of paragraphs in the body of the essay to determine whether the order needs work.  Are there any glaring  shifts in focus, style, or content that should be addressed? Does the reader move easily from one idea to the next within and between paragraphs?
 
    STYLE.  Does the writer’s style call attention to itself in a positive or negative way?  Is there a variety of sentence structures and rich vocabulary to avoid a monotonous tone?  Is the diction and word choice engaging and appropriate?  Are readers likely to be impressed by the writer’s style, be put off by it, or have little reaction to it?  Does the writer manage to communicate his or her unique personality, or does the voice in the paper seem generic?

    CORRECTNESS.  Are there errors in the writing you can help the writer correct?  If you find any errors on the draft, make the corrections.


EVALUATING SHORT STORIES

    PLOT.  Does the story have a dramatic, suspenseful plot?  Is there tension?  Does the action build to a crisis?  Is the crisis resolved?  Do readers have a sense that things in the story are happening for a reason rather than by coincidence or chance?  Will readers sense the conflict that’s driving the action?

    CHARACTER. How do you understand the personalities of the people in the story? Does the writer give readers enough information that they will have a sense of the main character’s motivations?  Does the main character seem like a round character, a believable character, a dynamic character?  What more would you like to know about the character in order to find the story more meaningful?

    POINT OF VIEW. Who is telling the story?  What do you observe about the narrator?  Do you have any suggestions or observations about the effectiveness of the narrator?  

    SETTING.  Will readers have enough of a sense of place as the story goes along?

    SYMBOLISM. What, if anything, in the story seems to take on a symbolic resonance?  How do you interpret the symbolism in the story?

    THEME.  Do you feel that the story will be meaningful to readers in some way?  What does the story mean to you?  Can you articulate this for the writer?

    Evaluate how well the writer has used narration and description to make the story as vivid as possible.  

 

 

 

     

 


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