A
Cultural Context for "Bartleby the Scrivener"
To begin with, consider this poem by Emily Dickinson,
written in 1861, eight years after Melville’s story was
published. Although the poem is not directly related to
Melville’s story, you may find that it throws a certain slant of light
on the character of Bartleby, on the despair he seems to be feeling.
There’s a Certain Slant of Light
by Emily
Dickinson
There’s a
certain Slant of light,
Winter
Afternoons,
That oppresses,
like the Heft
Of Cathedral
Tunes—
Heavenly Hurt
it gives us—
We can find no
scar,
But internal
difference,
Where the
Meanings, are—
None may teach
it—Any—
‘Tis the Seal
Despair—
An imperial
affliction
Sent us of the
Air—
When it comes,
the Landscape Listens—
Shadows—hold
their breath;
When it goes,
‘tis like the Distance—
On the look of
Death—
It's the "angle of light" that seems oppressive here—the low, depressed
way of seeing, feeling, understanding. The speaker is observing
how in such winter light we look at things in a depressed way, and this
depression hurts us to our very soul; it's a spiritual hurt, because
it's a loss of meaning, a loss of purpose. There's no visible
scar; everything is internal, invisible. We carry it inside,
tucked away. And nothing may "teach it"—there seems to be no
cure, no hope for healing this kind of hurt. It's a deadly kind
of despair. I find this poem highly resonant with Bartleby's
character.
*
Like many reviewers had begun to do, Fitz-James O’Brien in
1853 ripped into Herman Melville and his newest novel Pierre. Ironically, the same
magazine that ran O’Brien’s slashing review (excerpted below) had no
qualms publishing Melville’s short story “Bartleby the Scrivener” later
that year (in its Nov./Dec. issue).
The exerpt of O’Brien’s review from PUTNAM’S
that follows should provide some context for understanding the status
of Melville’s reputation by the time he published “Bartleby the
Scrivener.” Just previous to this excerpt, O’Brien has poured out
in great rivers his most lavish praise for Melville’s earlier work, the
South Pacific adventure novels. It's only when he turns to
Melville’s more recent work, particularly his latest novel, Pierre, that the tone of his review
changes sharply.
Mr.
Melville does not improve with time. His later books are a decided
falling off, and his last scarcely deserves naming; this however we
scarce believe to be an indication of exhaustion. Keats says
beautifully in his preface to “Endymion,” that “The imagination of a
boy is healthy, and the mature imagination of a man is healthy, but
there is a space of life between, in which the soul is in a ferment,
the character undecided, the way of life uncertain, the ambition
thick-sighted.”
Just
at present we believe the author of Pierre to be in this state of
ferment. Typee, his first book, was healthy; Omoo nearly so; after that
came Mardi, with its excusable wildness; then came Moby Dick, and
Pierre with its inexcusable insanity. We trust that these rhapsodies
will end the interregnum of nonsense to which Keats refers, as forming
a portion of every man’s life; and that Mr. Melville will write less at
random and more at leisure, than of late. Of his last book we would
fain not speak, did we not feel that he is just now at that stage of
author-life when a little wholesome advice may save him a hundred
future follies. When we first read Pierre, we felt a strong inclination
to believe the whole thing to be a well-got-up hoax. We remembered
having read a novel in six volumes once of the same order, called The
Abbess, in which the stilted style of writing is exposed very funnily;
and, as a specimen of unparalleled bombast, we believed it to be
unequalled until we met with Pierre. In Mardi there is a strong vein of
vague, morphinized poetry, running through the whole book. We do not
know what it means from the beginning to the end, but we do not want to
know, and accept it as a rhapsody. Babbalanja philosophizing drowsily,
or the luxurious sybaritical King Media, lazily listening to the hum of
waters, are all shrouded dimly in opiate-fumes, and dream-clouds, and
we love them only as sensual shadows. Whatever they say or do; whether
they sail in a golden boat, or eat silver fruits, or make pies of
emeralds and rubies, or any thing else equally ridiculous, we feel
perfectly satisfied that it is all right, because there is no claim
made upon our practical belief. But if Mr. Melville had placed
Babbalanja and Media and Yoomy in the Fifth Avenue, instead of a
longitude and latitude less inland; if we met them in theatres instead
of palm groves, and heard Babbalanja lecturing before the Historical
Society instead of his dreamy islanders, we should feel naturally
rather indignant at such a tax upon our credulity. We would feel
inclined to say with the Orientals, that Mr. Melville had been laughing
at our beards, and Pacha-like condemn on the instant to a literary
bastinado. Now Pierre has all the madness of Mardi, without its vague,
dreamy, poetic charm. All Mr. Melville’s many affectations of style and
thought are here crowded together in a mad mosaic. Talk of Rabelais’s
word-nonsense! there was always something queer, and odd, and funny,
gleaming through his unintelligibility. But Pierre transcends all the
nonsense-writing that the world ever beheld.
Thought
staggers through each page like one poisoned. Language is drunken and
reeling. Style is antipodical, and marches on its head. Then the moral
is bad. Conceal it how you will, a revolting picture presents itself. A
wretched, cowardly boy for a hero who from some feeling of mad romance,
together with a mass of inexplicable reasons which, probably, the
author alone fathoms, chooses to live in poverty with his illegitimate
sister, whom he passes off to the world as his wife, instead of being
respectably married to a legitimate cousin. Everybody is vicious in
some way or other. The mother is vicious with pride. Isabel has a
cancer of morbid, vicious, minerva-press-romance, eating into her
heart. Lucy Tartan is viciously humble, and licks the dust beneath
Pierre’s feet viciously. Delly Ulver is humanly vicious, and in the
rest of the book, whatever of vice is wanting in the remaining
characters, is made up by superabundant viciosities of style.
Let
Mr. Melville stay his step in time. He totters on the edge of a
precipice, over which all his hard-earned fame may tumble with such
another weight as Pierre attached to it. He has peculiar talents, which
may be turned to rare advantage. Let him diet himself for a year or two
on Addison, and avoid Sir Thomas Browne, and there is little doubt but
that he will make a notch on the American Pine.
Readers may want to consider the effect of this kind of scathing
criticism on a writer who has just finished a literary masterpiece for
the ages (Moby Dick).
Was the effect to produce "Bartleby the Scrivener"? Might this
critic have said much the same thing about "Bartleby"?
(What did the critics say
about "Bartleby"?) Granted those questions might require a bit of
research, but it would be an interesting quest. Readers can also
puzzle, without need of outside research, how to characterize
Melville's style, his characters, and the story's "moral."
A Brief Look at Melville in His Times
[Quotations that follow within my remarks below are from an excellent
scholarly book that is also very readable, Beneath the American Renaissance
by David Reynolds, published by Havard University Press in 1988.
Reynolds studies several well-known 19th century American writers and
their relation to the popular culture of their day. I apologize for the
roughness of these notes; I hope they shed some light anyway.]
Melville was fascinated by the “sensational literature” of his day. In
many ways, he was caught up in the great stream of popular literature
that flooded American city streets in the wake of the advent of the
penny presses, which churned out cheap papers and pamphlets exploiting
the public taste for criminal, erotic, and demonic stories. By the end
of the 1850s, sensational literature had been so ubiquitous that one
writer wearily observed how “No narrative of human depravity or crime
can shock or horrify an American reader” (Reynolds). Any attempts to
upbraid the perpetrators of these penny papers and presses, to moralize
them into submission, just popularized them all the more, as readers
flocked to see what all the fuss was about. Apparently the American
appetite for stories of crime, adventure, broken taboos, horror, gore,
murder, incest, all manner of perversity, was practically insatiable.
The more shocking the better.
Many of those whom we consider our great 19th century
writers—Hawthorne, Poe, Melville, to name three who worked in the short
story genre—were swept up in this popular sensationalist literature,
deeply immersed in it. They came out of it in their own ways. Poe would
mine those penny papers for story ideas, and they provided the genesis
for many of his so-called “horror” and crime stories. Hawthorne,
according to his son, was “pathetically addicted” to the crime
pamphlets that circulated widely in the 1830s, 40s, and 50s. When
Hawthorne was in Liverpool, as an American consul, he had bundles of
these papers shipped over to him. He just couldn’t be without them. And
Melville also was affected in his own way, as we’ll see.
One of the more popular stereotypes that arose out the mire of this
sensational literature was the “likable criminal” or the “justified
pariah.” The Billy the Kids were as popular then as they are now. We’re
still intrigued by the rugged lawlessness of this outsider who breaks
the laws, and makes the laws seem unjust. Bob Dylan expressed (and
embodied) the same idea in the sixties when he wrote in one song, “to
live outside the law, you must be honest.” And that’s exactly what
Melville’s characters came to be, those paradoxically noble
ne’er-do-wells. They were one clear debt he owed to the sensational
materials he kept his eye trained on. The likable criminal or the
justified pariah was the only character with force enough to fully
confront the powerful, but deeply entrenched forces robbing the rest of
us blind.
But those forces would never give up without a fight. An interesting
and
popular counterforce to America’s street fascination with these dark,
ambiguous heroes (and with the radical democrats in general) emerged in
New York literary circles and were broadly represented by the "Young
America" movement. Writers in this movement were characterized by their
ability to don a comfortable conventionality, to achieve a smoothness,
genteelness, a polish that would play well “across the water.” All the
darker elements, the troublesome moral ambiguities that had bubbled up
from the streets, were expelled. It was this “sanitized” literature
that Melville deeply hated and which he satirized in his largely
misunderstood novel Pierre.
Melville found the elitist but bland,
sterile conventionality that pervaded the (influential) Young America
movement distasteful. He felt that the image of America it portrayed
was false to the bone. It was willfully blind to the paradoxes of
idealism and violence that was the true pulse of life in America. As
David Reynolds explains, he felt that “to be a fully American democrat,
one with a realistic vision of the world, was to be a justified pariah,
a rebel against what seemed a corrupt society." The wealthy,
aristocratic classes, hiding their hypocrisy and greed behind a veil of
false gentility and feeding off the rest of us from their seats of
power, would only be exposed, could only be defeated, by the
paradoxically likable outlaw. Moby
Dick, Melville’s masterpiece, is a
complex blend of just such paradoxical characters--the humane cannibal,
the inspiringly robust but monomaniacal captain out for revenge, the
good but ineffectual Starbuck, the terrifying force of the whale
itself. (But in addition to its thematic complexity, Moby Dick was a
full seventy years ahead of its time stylistically, and although some
critics reviewed it favorably, it never found a reading audience until
the modernists rescued it in the 1920s. At that time Meliville was
recognized
as one of their own.)
“Bartleby the Scrivener,” like a lot of Melville’s fiction, came
streaming from the same literary spring that gushed out much of the
sensationalist literature of his day. There was one novel in particular
that seems to have been extremely influential. George Foster, in 1849,
wrote a novel called New York Slices
that essentially “exposed Wall
Street as a totally dehumanizing environment producing puppet-like
people and universal misery cloaked by gentility” (Reynolds). It
contained a “pale young man” (every office had one, Foster wrote) who
lived daily with the understanding that he might suffer the loss of
everything at a moment’s notice. These pale young men were slashing
their wrists all across New York, the novel suggested. Also in Foster’s
novel: a scene to describe the Tombs (a New York prison), a place that
epitomized the very bottom of the pit, the very worst depravity a man
might fall into; another scene where Broadway appears alive at noon,
but deserted and dead in the gray early morning light; and yet another
scene in which the city’s pawn shops appear as repositories for
possessions of the dead or people who’ve fallen into poverty. “Bartleby
the Scrivener” appears to be a literary version of a similar kind of
tale, and it borrows heavily from many of Foster’s central images. The
difference in Melville’s story is his literary skill, his
inventiveness—the form he gave to his material—his “skillful invention
of the flawed narrator, the symbolism of the setting and the imagery of
the “walls,” the psychological and metaphysical richness of the
characters” (Reynolds). But there’s definitely a debt to George Foster,
a friendly fellowship in purpose and theme, and the parallels between
the tales abound.
Bartleby can be seen as a kind of “likable pariah” (I say that and
duck!) in as
much as he evokes sympathy, but he's a pariah embalmed with
genteel smoothness, embodying the utterly good manners
of conventional society. There’s nothing “dirty” or unpleasant or
violent or the least bit sinister
about him. He’s a thoroughly conventional young man, albeit pallid and
even “cadaverous,” a kind of ghostly walking dead. You can feel
Melville’s satiric hand, his vindictiveness against that kind of empty
display in the way he draws Bartleby’s character. The man literally
sinks into his death, curled up on the grass at the Tombs, with utter
decorum and gentlemanliness—never a harsh word, no mess, no gore, no
popular American sensationalism to it at all. He just dies ever so
passively, ever so politely, passing into the next world leaving no
blood on anyone’s hands. While we get to know him, he’s the “pale young
man” (a cadaver, in Melville’s hands) who along the way to conventional
“success” loses his sense of the meaning of it all, who succumbs in
puppet-like fashion and with mechanical regularity to his own despair.
Bartleby seems almost inhuman himself, and perhaps Melville means him
be. Turkey and Nippers, although we may identify with them more easily,
are no less mechanistic than Bartleby in the regularity, the
predictability of their responses. With clockwork precision they
“complement” one another’s shifting moods, performing their tasks in
equally servile, puppet-like fashion. The office where everyone works
itself seems more like a cage than a human habitation—shouldn’t a work
place be habitable? (maybe not)—with its walls in every window, its
lone shaft of light from above. Bartleby, poor man, upon arrival is
placed in a cage within a cage—his rebellion, a pitiful joke. There is
no rebellion. There is no one listening. There is only the interminable
self-interest of the powerful.
On the one hand readers may feel something for Bartleby. His utter
despair seems real, as real as the “heavenly hurt” in Dickinson’s poem.
His death, his life seems pathetic, and he may evoke sympathy. On
the other hand, some readers may be too annoyed with Bartleby to care;
they are so frustrated and repelled by his sickly rebellion that
they're almost glad to see him go. Where is the author's feeling
for Bartleby in all of this? Well hidden, to be sure.
Masterfully hidden.
Further Reading
Read Melville's works, or about Melville's works, at The Life and Works of Herman Melville,
a website "dedicated to disseminating information about Herman Melville
on the Internet and the World Wide Web."