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IN
PROGRESS (65)
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PASS
(75 / 85)
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HIGH
PASS (95)
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Focus
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Writing does
not present an idea, state a thesis, or make a claim. There's no focal
point to anchor the paragraphs.
The thesis
sentence is not grammatical, not explicit, or far too broad.
There is
no connection between the essay's development and its thesis.
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Writing clearly
presents an idea, states a thesis, or makes a claim. The thesis is general
but explicit, anchoring the paragraphs efficiently.
The main
idea may be stated imprecisely, or somewhat too broadly, or not explicitly
enough, or it may be ill positioned. At times the essay seems unrelated
to the thesis.
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The thesis
is clear, precise, and explicit. The idea presented in the thesis is provocative
and original.
The connection
between the paper's substantive development and the provocative idea stated
in the thesis is always apparent.
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Development
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Paragraphs
do not provide enough detail or evidence to sufficiently support general
assertions.
Writers seems
unaware of the variety of strategies available to fully explain topic
sentences and/or overall thesis.
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Paragraphs
provide details and/or evidence to support general assertions. Writer
seems aware of the variety of strategies to support topic sentences and
overall thesis.
Paragraphs
provide only minimal or vague detail to support general assertions. Some
awareness of the variety of strategies to support topic sentences and
overall thesis.
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Paragraphs
consistently provide vivid, imaginative, substantive detail to support general
assertions. A variety of strategies are used to give the essay subtlety,
depth, and complexity. The ideas expressed are original, provocative, memorable. |
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Style
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Vocabulary,
point of view, tone, and/or syntax are consistently weak, incorrect, or
inappropriate for the audience and genre. |
Vocabulary,
point of view, tone, and/or syntax are appropriate for the most part, although
there may be occasional lapses. |
Frequent lapses
in vocabulary, point of view, tone, and/or syntax may result in a style
that's often incorrect, monotonous, or bland.
Vocabulary, point of view, tone, and/or syntax are carefully tailored to
the audience and genre. Readers are likely to be impressed not only by what
is said, but how well it is said. |
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Organization
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Writing demonstrates
a consistent inability to order the discussion effectively. Paragraphs may
not be unified or coherent, and there is little or no evidence of intentionality
in the text's overall structure. |
Writing demonstrates
an ability to order the discussion effectively. Paragraphs are unified
and coherent. Transitions guide readers through the text. Overall structure
is sensible and correct.
Although
writing mostly demonstrates an ability to order the discussion effectively,
lapses may occur; some paragraphs may not be unified or coherent, or the
overall structure might suffer from a weak introduction or weak conclusion.
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Writing demonstrates
an ability to use paragraphs to order the discussion effectively, using
transitions to guide readers through the text--but there is a creative element
to the paper's structure that is highly successful. The introduction may
be especially effective at creating a hook to entice readers, or the conclusion
may do something more memorable than simply repeat what has been stated
before. |
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Correctness
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Writing demonstrates
persistent errors in more than one category that interfere with a reader's
ability to understand the text. |
Writing is
generally correct in terms of grammar, punctuation and spelling, though
some errors are present.
One or more
persistent errors or a frequent variety of errors in grammar, syntax,
punctuation, or spelling mar the paper. It may be obvious that the writer
knows what's correct, but because of a failure to proofread has let frequent
typos mar the work.
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Writing is
virtually free of grammar, syntax, punctuation, and spelling errors. Where
there are errors, they do not interfere with a reader's ability to understand
the text, and may actually enhance it. |
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Final
Average:
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